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Rochelle Jewel Shapiro's avatar

The pleasure of a painspokenl, witty poem.

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Svetlana Litvinchuk's avatar

A deceptively minimalist poem. Thank you for reading!

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T R Poulson's avatar

Nice ‘small’ poem. Does a lot with its no-frills language. It’s kept popping into my head

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Svetlana Litvinchuk's avatar

For a small poem, it says so much. So glad it was a memorable piece for you.

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Bill Scott's avatar

A description of every artist or tormented loved one I’ve ever known.

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Svetlana Litvinchuk's avatar

Yes, definitely relatable.

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Debra O's avatar

⚡️You must have been standing at my house last night, Michael. I could not have described (or painted) a more perfect poem. Yours is exactly how I witnessed the storm (and those ever- faulty predictions!)...⛈️Thank you!

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Svetlana Litvinchuk's avatar

Love that synchronicity when it happens. Thank you for being here to read this now. :)

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