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Rochelle Jewel Shapiro's avatar

I'm gpbs,acled! I have never read anything like this. Such power and wordplay--land of milk and money. WOW, WOW, WOW.

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Kait Quinn's avatar

"Someone

beautiful to notice

your swollen bulb

of suffering."

The enjambment of this piece! I was caught off guard so many times in this piece, and I absolutely loved it.

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Emma Goldman-Sherman's avatar

Every turn, a surprise, that jolt of discovery! Awesome sauciness.

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T R Poulson's avatar

Love the details and implications, the mix of humor with a touch of sinister—at least that’s my reading of it

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