I enjoyed this "trip" and I like your concept of basing this on humor. It really works well, especially when you think about it like that. Personally, I'd like to have a more positive spin, but still a great job.
As a playwright who has taught this play (and stood in silent awe in an elevator alone with Kushner, and wrote a poem about that, and yes, I am autistic) I love every atom of this poem. We must all do the great work!
I enjoyed this "trip" and I like your concept of basing this on humor. It really works well, especially when you think about it like that. Personally, I'd like to have a more positive spin, but still a great job.
As a playwright who has taught this play (and stood in silent awe in an elevator alone with Kushner, and wrote a poem about that, and yes, I am autistic) I love every atom of this poem. We must all do the great work!
Wow! I almost missed that ending because of the way it was isolated, and even without it, it was a wow.
love the various ironic uses of the "ha"s. ty for sharing, very timely as well
This is deep and resonates. Thank you