That first line! Wow 😮 It’s an ordinary activity but the assonance with the “o” sound makes it intriguing and intense. I can feel the storm approaching before it arrives.
This hits hard for someone who's been through hurricanes and tgeir aftermath in several different states and countries. The violence is so short. The aftermath is so long.
Wow. This is an amazing poem the last lines are truly chilling.
Hooked from the first line.
That first line! Wow 😮 It’s an ordinary activity but the assonance with the “o” sound makes it intriguing and intense. I can feel the storm approaching before it arrives.
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Beautifully written poem with deeper implications than the immediate aftermath of hurricanes. The spacial form works beautifully.
Thank you ❤️🔥
Awesome poem 🙌🏻🙌🏻 love the creative formatting! Congrats on your publication here, friend 🔥
Thank you Alex!!!
This hits hard for someone who's been through hurricanes and tgeir aftermath in several different states and countries. The violence is so short. The aftermath is so long.
Nice poem. Would prefer the ending be no one’s screaming
bc they’ve been saved
I think I would prefer that ending too (in real life) but it doesn’t match up with my experiences.
It’s a double entendre