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Alma M.'s avatar

Beautiful! It’s as if reality melted in this poem. The imagery was excellent!

Richard C.'s avatar

Love this. Just started his book "Why Poetry."

Kevin's avatar

Wow beautiful. So brave.

Lisa Jensen's avatar

I adore that last stanza! Very relatable from my years as an adjunct.

Holly Hunt's avatar

Yes. I feel this reality from a similar low hill. Excellent dramatic movement in this one!

Jen Edwards's avatar

Great poem!!