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Alma M.'s avatar

Beautiful! It’s as if reality melted in this poem. The imagery was excellent!

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Richard C.'s avatar

Love this. Just started his book "Why Poetry."

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Kevin's avatar

Wow beautiful. So brave.

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Lisa Jensen's avatar

I adore that last stanza! Very relatable from my years as an adjunct.

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Holly Hunt's avatar

Yes. I feel this reality from a similar low hill. Excellent dramatic movement in this one!

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Jen Edwards's avatar

Great poem!!

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