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Gary Michael Dault's avatar

Brilliant!! "ghost grey gelatin? "leafy gas pumps"? "trucks hauling oranges and Oreos?" "salt block and soybean feld." Really brilliant!

Rochelle Jewel Shapiro's avatar

Took my breath. How the poet doesn't let go of the metaphor, making it strike louder on each line.

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