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T R Poulson's avatar

Thank you so much for giving this poem a wonderful home among so many poems I admire :)

Stuart Anderson's avatar

TR is rocking the pantoum form and at the same time conveying her thoughts in strong images. This is the kind of synergy that formal poems try to achieve, often with less success than TR has here. And the poem makes us remember the pilots, animals, people on the ground, and all victims of this disaster, instead of letting them slip silently into the past. This is a large part of what poetry is for, and this poem fulfills that purpose beautifully.

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