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Dick Westheimer's avatar

Holy effing cow! How I wish I could write a poem such as this.

T R Poulson's avatar

Every line in this is exquisite, and I love how the poem hooks us and then only raises the stakes even higher as the poem moves. I really need to order one of his books

Poem Per Diem's avatar

Who is the translator? It would be wonderful if you could credit them too :)

Svetlana Litvinchuk's avatar

Hi, Apologies for this post going out without properly crediting the translator. This post was updated several hours ago, as soon as this was noticed. It is A.S. Kline, as noted in the footnote.

Poem Per Diem's avatar

Lovely! Thanks for this, Svetlana!

Reginald Gibbons's avatar

Undoubtedly one of Lorca's absolutely worst poems...

T R Poulson's avatar

If this is one of Lorca's worst, then I clearly need to read more of this poet. . .for me it's one of the best poems I've read this month

Svetlana Litvinchuk's avatar

When one has so many excellent poems some will certainly pale in comparison! It's fascinating how a poem can simultaneously be considered one's best and one's worst work, depending on the reader. Poetry's subjectivity is one of its most enchanting qualities.

Merilee's avatar

beautiful. makes me proud to be a woman

Svetlana Litvinchuk's avatar

I love that poetry has the power to make us feel this in our bodies. Thank you for sharing, and for reading.

Siria :)'s avatar

I love Lorca, he’s so elegant in each of his writings!

Svetlana Litvinchuk's avatar

Definitely a soft touch.

Gary Michael Dault's avatar

This is the best erotic poem I've ever read.

Lorca keeps getting rediscovered and it's time for anotheer of those

critical paroxysms.

By an amiable coicidence, I am just now rereading Leslie Stainton's majestic biography (1999).

Svetlana Litvinchuk's avatar

So happy this moved you.