Dripping with metaphor I like it. The caterpillar image ties the piece together. Poetic yet grounded. I'd love to see you take it further leaning harder into the grayness theme or even twist that butterfly ending to make it as unsettling as it is beautiful. Please keep writing and exploring your gift.
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Dripping with metaphor I like it. The caterpillar image ties the piece together. Poetic yet grounded. I'd love to see you take it further leaning harder into the grayness theme or even twist that butterfly ending to make it as unsettling as it is beautiful. Please keep writing and exploring your gift.