Everything begins and ends with salt
my heart
Oh, mine too.
the ocean I’m so scared of
because it reminds me of love... Yum!
This line is gold.
Love it! The use of language and metaphor is superb, and I love how it builds and then whiplashes me (in a good way) with that simple surprise ending. I want to keep reading this one all day long
That ending was so powerful--whiplash is a fantastic way to describe it, T R.
...the meal I make for my friends so I don’t have / to tell them I need them... (❤️)
Love LOVE this line.
Love it
So glad you love this poem, Rachel. Thank you for your readership.
Ohhhh wow. This is stunning.
Thank you for reading!
my heart
Oh, mine too.
the ocean I’m so scared of
because it reminds me of love... Yum!
This line is gold.
Love it! The use of language and metaphor is superb, and I love how it builds and then whiplashes me (in a good way) with that simple surprise ending. I want to keep reading this one all day long
That ending was so powerful--whiplash is a fantastic way to describe it, T R.
...the meal I make for my friends so I don’t have / to tell them I need them... (❤️)
Love LOVE this line.
Love it
So glad you love this poem, Rachel. Thank you for your readership.
Ohhhh wow. This is stunning.
Thank you for reading!