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Katy's avatar

Every word had me enamoured.

Abby Luby's avatar

a wild brief journey that stays with you forever.

Cynthia R. Pratt's avatar

I always love Ross GA’s twists and turns in his poems, in this case, walking us through those turns until his surprise ending. And, you (I) do want to keep walking with him—-every time!!

Rex Maurice Oppenheimer's avatar

A beautiful surprise. Like when the sun touches a flower, or a cloud, or grime in the gutter and you sense a fleeting fulfillment