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Adrião Pereira da Cunha's avatar

This poem feels like someone quietly admitting how violence never really leaves the places it touches. The idea of a bullet being “lost” hits hard, because the poem shows exactly where it ends up in fear, in kids who won’t go upstairs alone, in the way people talk when they forget someone died. What struck me most was how ordinary the images are: a grandson, a classmate, a YouTube comment. It makes the damage feel close, not abstract. The “two Americas” inside a bullet is a line that stays with you long after reading. There’s a tired sadness in the voice, like someone who’s seen this happen too many times. And the contrast between real people hurting and officials brushing it off is honestly chilling. By the end, you’re left with this heavy sense that nothing about this is accidental the fragments keep finding new places to lodge themselves. It’s a quiet poem, but it leaves a mark.

Francesca's avatar

This is wonderful, and so heartbreaking. Thank you so much for writing.

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