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Adrião Pereira da Cunha's avatar

This poem feels like someone trying to breathe inside a city that keeps pressing itself into every corner of their life.

The way Taipei shows up in the body in the lungs, the stomach, the senses makes the city feel almost too close, like it’s impossible to escape.

There’s a kind of tired affection running through the lines, as if the speaker loves the place but is worn down by it at the same time.

I felt the hunger in the poem, not just for food but for space, for quiet, for something softer than concrete and fumes.

The images are so vivid sunshine being “pilfered,” fish being “netted,” real estate flyers sweeping the sidewalks it’s the chaos of city life captured perfectly.

The “lions and tigers” in an empty stomach is such a painfully human way of describing how a city can devour you while you’re trying to live in it.

There’s a sense of being overwhelmed, but also strangely connected, like the speaker can’t separate themselves from Taipei even if they tried.

I love how the poem turns everyday noise toilets flushing, traffic, construction into emotional texture.

By the end, you feel the weight of a place that never stops expanding, even as the person inside it feels smaller and hungrier.

It’s raw, intimate, and honest in a way that only someone who has truly lived inside a city can write.

Piia's avatar

liked this a lot, very tangible!

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