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Andrea (Andy) Curran 🌄's avatar

Wonderful work! I especially love this line “it’s summer, and the sun is a bowling ball

rolling down the nape of my neck”

Kgaz's avatar

"I marvel at how friendly failure is" is probably going to rattle around my head for a good while.

Rebecca Weil's avatar

Brilliant poem, and the end line - such a line!