Whew! Nailed this one, January!!! Thank you for sharing. Saving it... I will reread this for all those ironic moments that life pulls back its veil and reveals its crooked smile.
Very strong, and at the same time, a certain casualness, as if golden cracks were as commonplace as casino chips, which only have the value they are arbitrarily ascribed. The author seems to mirror this as well.
I saw you at your webinar at Conscious Writers Collective! I can't unsee it, in a good way! Big fan of so many big poems here, but as much or more a big fan of your vision here, and its execution! Cheers!
Love the last line
Whew! Nailed this one, January!!! Thank you for sharing. Saving it... I will reread this for all those ironic moments that life pulls back its veil and reveals its crooked smile.
Yes.
Very strong, and at the same time, a certain casualness, as if golden cracks were as commonplace as casino chips, which only have the value they are arbitrarily ascribed. The author seems to mirror this as well.
V well articulated, Paul. Thank you for reading!
I saw you at your webinar at Conscious Writers Collective! I can't unsee it, in a good way! Big fan of so many big poems here, but as much or more a big fan of your vision here, and its execution! Cheers!