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Rochelle Jewel Shapiro's avatar

Oh, a poem of grief from a poet who actually had so much to grieve! Gorgeous and painful.

Lorna Wood's avatar

So glad you used this translation. Lenore’s daughter was my best friend when I was a kid. I knew her and Bill well. She gave me a book on haiku and encouraged my poetry.

Tod Cheney's avatar

I love how much can be said with elegant scarcity.

Nanette Schieron's avatar

This short poem says so much. Beautiful!