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Sherry Mossafer Rind's avatar

What a gorgeous poem! It drives itself forward with word choice and rhythm; but best of all, it leaps smoothly from one image to another. Every idea, every sentence ties together no matter how far afield it seems to wander, one following another with the logic of sense and feeling. I'm trying to put into words the movement that the mind makes when reading this poem. The tag line doesn't do it justice.

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Michael Drummond's avatar

Of course that's how it is with me! Ha ha ha, how wonderful!

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Tod Cheney's avatar

Have to order one of his books now. Wonderful poem.

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Cynthia R. Pratt's avatar

Gaspar is such a wonderful poet. This poem just turns and twists. Wow.

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Jaime Jacques's avatar

Wow!!!!! *Immediately googles Frank X Gaspar*

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blood of aurora's avatar

in love

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