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Rochelle Jewel Shapiro's avatar

"God just spit on a rock, and it became

a geologist." I don't think I've ever read such a quirky line.

Annie Stenzel's avatar

dang. so brilliant. marvelous. REALLY glad to read this one today. thanks to the max!

kaylen alexandra's avatar

There must be operas and car accidents and the flicker of lights turning on and off… can’t pick a favorite line because they all shine.

Anthony DiPietro's avatar

Bringing together two big areas of interest to me—the interplanetary and the interpersonal. It’s been awhile since a poem made me feel the way this one does at the end! Amazing where it goes and what this poem accomplishes in such small space of the page.

Laura Buxbaum's avatar

Wow. So good.