I love this poem - I keep going back to reread it. Yes, a little bee falling asleep in a flower is a gentle beautiful image. I was going to name my other favorite parts but it’s how the whole piece blends together. Thank you for sharing this loveliness.
Oof definitely a new favorite poem 🙌🏻
Us too!
Love this poem!
This one definitely swept us off our feet right away.
I love this poem - I keep going back to reread it. Yes, a little bee falling asleep in a flower is a gentle beautiful image. I was going to name my other favorite parts but it’s how the whole piece blends together. Thank you for sharing this loveliness.
Yes, It's really not an easy task to separate all the pieces working together to make this poem so wonderful.
love this
So glad to hear this!
The implications in that last line—wow!
So many layers there.
This is so beautiful, thank you for sharing.
Thank you for reading.
'A billion years since that day with my mother / or seems like it / Her middle name was Marie'
oof, this hit hard. So simple and so powerful. Thank you for sharing this poem.
You’re welcome, Kate. Thank you for your readership🌻