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Alexa Bocek's avatar

This is incredible, and will stick with me.

Debella's avatar

So beautiful and poignant. Touched my soul♥️

Kathy Henry's avatar

I am shamed by my ignorance. You have instructed me to see and to hear and to listen.

Beauty makes one speechless. You produced descriptive beauty. :^)

Kim Nelson's avatar

Imagery reigns supreme in this full-story prose poem.

T R Poulson's avatar

Love the language and metaphor. Says so much in just a few words

Hannah Eve Levy's avatar

thank you so much for sharing this little poem of mine 🐇🤍

Eugenia P. Frankenberg 🌻's avatar

beautiful and potent, hannah. 💌

Amy Shay's avatar

Hannah, this is a gut-punch of exactly what I needed. Wow. So much of this poem is also my origin story. I thank you so much for sharing it 🙏❤️

Hannah Eve Levy's avatar

thank you for the kind words and for reading!

Annalise Parady's avatar

Hannah, I’ve loved this poem since you first shared it - congrats on it finding such a lovely home! Incredible writing

Hannah Eve Levy's avatar

thank you so much ♥️♥️

Damn Jones's avatar

Excellent first line.

Jaime Jacques's avatar

gorgeous