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Z ㅤㅤㅤ's avatar

Beautiful beautiful poem

Amy Shay's avatar

Wow. I had to catch my breath for a moment! Absolutely beautiful, thank you for putting this out into the world 💜

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thank you for reading!

Kyla Gray's avatar

wow this hits hard. very visual and gut wrenching, in a good way. thank you for sharing!

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thanks so much!

Paul De's avatar

Alex Dawson continues to become more incisively tender in her precise piercing into holy meaning. I am so glad to see her work showing up on a new venue.

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Thank you so much Paul. I appreciate your readership!

Hannah Eve Levy's avatar

I love that line, "I am a rearrangement"

Jae J Casella's avatar

Alex!! When I saw your name in my daily Only Poems feed, I knew I was in for a treat! Wow. Just WOW with these gut punch lines. Go you poet, you 💜

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Ah thank you so much!!

Shirley Pectin's Portal's avatar

Painful and glorious.

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Thank you 🖤

Alix Klingenberg's avatar

So good.

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Thank you Alix!

Alex Dawson's avatar

Ahh so excited to see this 😍! Thank you!

Abbie Shanahan's avatar

This is visceral in its pain. Beautiful Alex, thank you for sharing it with the world.

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Thank you so much!

Aardhra Chandran's avatar

Beautiful poem ,congratulations Alex 🩷