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Evelyn K. Brunswick's avatar

Anything by Le Guin is fine by me.

Adrião Pereira da Cunha's avatar

This poem feels like one of those late‑night moments when everything is quiet but your mind won’t settle.

The rain becomes this soft background presence, almost blending with the speaker’s own thoughts.

There’s something deeply intimate in wanting to ask, “Why is it all so strange,” yet keeping the question inside.

The drifting into dreams dark ground, far‑off places, captures that feeling of slipping away even while lying next to someone.

I love how the poem holds both closeness and distance at the same time.

The repetition of “in the dark” gives the whole scene a hushed, half‑awake atmosphere.

Change hangs over the lines like a quiet truth the speaker can feel but can’t quite name.

The weeping sound, whether rain or voice, adds a touch of vulnerability that feels very real.

“Lie easy, love” comes across as a gentle attempt to steady the moment, to keep things from unraveling.

It’s a tender snapshot of two people sharing a bed while the world—and maybe their inner worlds quietly shift around them.

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