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Vridhi's avatar

This literally won my heart

Uma Jag's avatar

just breathtaking and delightfully surprising 😮

Amanda's avatar

This is stunning. Absolutely love all of it.

Xsayathiya's avatar

What an intriguing poem.

kaylen alexandra's avatar

"She holds me and whispers thick things to me: French toast, weed smoke, butterscotch pudding, a crowd of a hundred thousand singing your words back to you." Stunning. Thank you for sharing this piece.

scrappyrat's avatar

Damn. Now *that's* a poem.

Susan Black Allen's avatar

Delicious and leaves me hungry for more!

maria's avatar

Clicked on it with alacrity and savored it like the last bite of custard.

Lyriquediscorde's avatar

Wow. Just fucking wow.

M F Drummy's avatar

I love everything about this freaking poem!! Nicely done!

Tara Mesalik MacMahon's avatar

Might be the most amazing poem I've read this year. Thank you for it