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Joya du Bé's avatar

WoW. « Pretty cages »! Love this.

Rochelle Jewel Shapiro's avatar

And what a title! Who knew one could be this long and a wry leap from the poem's narrative.

Rochelle Jewel Shapiro's avatar

What twists and turns! Just when you think you can pin it down, the pin pops.

Svetlana Litvinchuk's avatar

Great imagery here. I hope you find a home for this line in a poem you write.

Karan Kapoor's avatar

Love your way of describing this one, Rochelle!

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Svetlana Litvinchuk's avatar

Oh, I feel this.