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Joya du Bé's avatar

WoW. « Pretty cages »! Love this.

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TLDR's avatar

"But, please, body, more time" <3

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Svetlana Litvinchuk's avatar

Oh, I feel this.

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Rochelle Jewel Shapiro's avatar

And what a title! Who knew one could be this long and a wry leap from the poem's narrative.

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Svetlana Litvinchuk's avatar

A poem all on its own!

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Rochelle Jewel Shapiro's avatar

What twists and turns! Just when you think you can pin it down, the pin pops.

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Svetlana Litvinchuk's avatar

Great imagery here. I hope you find a home for this line in a poem you write.

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Karan Kapoor's avatar

Love your way of describing this one, Rochelle!

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