black stone descended from Heaven the pilgrims in white circling it
Almost disconcertingly vivid and tactile. At first I misread "rustling" as "rusting." Rusting peppers, I liked that too. Poetry you can TOUCH is miraculous.
Almost disconcertingly vivid and tactile. At first I misread "rustling" as "rusting." Rusting peppers, I liked that too. Poetry you can TOUCH is miraculous.