black stone descended from Heaven the pilgrims in white circling it
The way the grandmother, her life, her prayers, the vegetables in the designs, all woven together, seamless. Gorgeous.
Almost disconcertingly vivid and tactile. At first I misread "rustling" as "rusting." Rusting peppers, I liked that too. Poetry you can TOUCH is miraculous.
The way the grandmother, her life, her prayers, the vegetables in the designs, all woven together, seamless. Gorgeous.
Almost disconcertingly vivid and tactile. At first I misread "rustling" as "rusting." Rusting peppers, I liked that too. Poetry you can TOUCH is miraculous.