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Ella B. Winters's avatar

'Who can splash off the stain of not belonging?'

What a ride this poem was - no lazy river in sight; full-on Thunderbolt slide all the way.

T R Poulson's avatar

I love that line as well. So specific and universal all at the same time

Janet Still aka pen names's avatar

"..I learn I must dunk him three times,

loving him more each time he comes up..."

This poem grabbed me in ways I did not expect to be taken.