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ed sancious's avatar

beautifully crafted poetry

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Debbie Abbott's avatar

A beautiful painting within itself, this poem is one I will read many times, absorbing the depths of each line.

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T R Poulson's avatar

One of the best ekphrastic poems I've read in a while. I love how it adds a story not told in the painting, and how it delves into biblical myths. I can't tell if the speaker is a 'religious' person or not, and I like that. The story is woven into the visual art--and really the poem stands alone even without looking at it, as ekphrasis should. And it offers a perfect reflection of the work some of us have done in engaging with Leonard Cohen.

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Nnamdi Bryan's avatar

Your appreciation melted my heart. Thank you so so much for engaging with my poem, and for your kind words.

Thanks so much.

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emma's avatar

really gorgeous

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Debra O's avatar

I feel the deluge: the purging, the cleansing. I am Noah, the animals, the ark. Mostly, I am rain.

Such a bold, vivid, & poignant poem.

Gentle too. Very Van Gogh indeed.

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