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Gina Fiore's avatar

Fully enjoyed this.

Adrião Pereira da Cunha's avatar

The poem feels like someone laughing to keep from revealing how much they actually care, using memes, myth, and bravado to hide a very human longing to be wanted. Beneath the jokes and swagger, there’s a tenderness that keeps slipping through the fear of running out of ways to connect, the hope that someone might still choose you in the noise. The flirtation is messy and sweet, full of bravado that barely masks a trembling desire to be seen. Being called Icarus becomes strangely intimate: the thrill of flying too close to someone’s heat, even if it burns you a little. The poem keeps shifting between humour and prophecy because that’s how this generation survives half‑joking, half‑pleading. When it turns toward ash, chariots, enchanted swords, it feels like a whole generation trying to mythologise its loneliness so it hurts less. And beneath the jokes about AI, there’s a real fear of being replaced, of losing the right to make something that feels alive. The final question lands like a quiet wound: will we keep daring to create, or let the machines take the fire from our hands.

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