The American Scene [2] by Taylor Byas
"Before she is noticed, she is the dark aberration thrown against the country club background."
The American Scene [2] by Taylor Byas Scene One - Sewanee Golf Course & Inn, Post-Dawn [A BLACK WOMAN sits on her balcony overlooking one of the course’s holes. She can be seen grabbing her upper calf and wincing. Below her, three WHITE MEN gather on the hole’s green while one prepares to putt.] NARRATOR Before she is noticed, she is the dark aberration thrown against the country club background. An amateur photographer, she has left her camera inside on the bed even though the 9-hole course shakes out like an inherited patchwork quilt. She is tuned to risk like a violin. The ache in her calf has nowhere to be but where it is, the small knot of it uncurling into a full cramp, high up, nearly behind the knee. The intensity of the sun threatens to agitate it further. On the green, money with its different sound. No clink or paper- shuffling, but the pop of a soft clap, the huffs of faulty-ignition laughter. The men in different versions of the same uniform and wide-legged stance. As she massages into the muscle, she bites her lip to hide the hiss that nearly flits onto the silent course. One of the men takes a slow swing. The sole checkered flag bodyrolls in the light breeze. His white ball arches towards the hole like a branch burdened with alien weight. And here we arrive, where her gasp is a 7-iron slicing through air. The men turn their heads and gawk while the wind helps the forgotten ball along into the hole. It thuds, hollow, unconverted to celebration. The men’s shadows slant away from them like any smart, black thing should.







I so admire Taylor Byas and was excited to see that she was a runner up. In fact I think she probably deserved to win, though I haven’t seen the winning poems yet :) She’s a wonderful formalist, and though I was disappointed not to see any traditional forms in these poems, the poems are oh so good in their own free versier forms. The interview was great as well :) I’m excited to someday read the American Scene book :)
lack of imagination is powerful too powerful sometimes