I love how this can be read literally or as an extended metaphor for so many things. So many great lines, and the poem is greater than the sum of its parts :) Great find
This is excellent. Immediately memorable, the kind of piece you scramble to paste into a journal while the glow uis still fierce. Hunger with no mouth! A great invention. Gary Michael Dault
Eloquent existentialism. Something so common is so profound. And perfectly titled.
I love how this can be read literally or as an extended metaphor for so many things. So many great lines, and the poem is greater than the sum of its parts :) Great find
I love that too!
This is excellent. Immediately memorable, the kind of piece you scramble to paste into a journal while the glow uis still fierce. Hunger with no mouth! A great invention. Gary Michael Dault
"Rust is hunger with no mouth" - love this line. And suddenly rust becomes everything in our lives that consumes us.