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Béa's avatar

I love this poem and I love how you guys are sharing extraordinary prose poetry pieces. As a prose poetry crafter myself, I thank you. I'm very drawn to the poet as that personage sometimes figures in my writings as well so it's nice to see another face of the poet, especially in their favorite or least favorite or simply random bar.

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Tara Mesalik MacMahon's avatar

There is so much I love about this poem, and on so many levels. I’ll never say to myself again, “no more stars, no more hearts in your poems!.” as this poet shows that even the most overused can be brilliantly reinvented. I especially love the poet’s elbow (poet in the story) inadvertently knocking the drinks over as she tries to speak “tender"--splash, crash. I’m still laughing. Start to finish, an unforgettable poem gem. Thank you!

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