“There is a land of the living and a land of the lost, and the bridge is fine as a child’s ribbon.”
Wow! That ending is sublime!
I really learned something about poetry from this poem.
Honored. :)
“the bridge is fine as a child’s ribbon” really stayed with me.
There’s something unsettling about how gentle that image is next to everything surrounding it. Beautiful piece.
Been there, done that. Love the line breaks. Love the beginning, middle and end. Wish I wrote it.
This is an extraordinary use of myth to illuminate a current situation. And how much is shown without the specifics of each person in the relationship! Wow!
I think the poem is great… I would rethink some of the line breaks
Wow! That ending is sublime!
I really learned something about poetry from this poem.
Honored. :)
“the bridge is fine as a child’s ribbon” really stayed with me.
There’s something unsettling about how gentle that image is next to everything surrounding it. Beautiful piece.
Been there, done that. Love the line breaks. Love the beginning, middle and end. Wish I wrote it.
This is an extraordinary use of myth to illuminate a current situation. And how much is shown without the specifics of each person in the relationship! Wow!
I think the poem is great… I would rethink some of the line breaks