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Andrea Jurjević's avatar

Thanks for sharing my work, Karan. And Happy New Year to Only Poems!

ONLY POEMS DAILY's avatar

Thank you, Andrea! A most wonderful year to you as well, my friend :)

Cynthia R. Pratt's avatar

The language that plays with sounds and surprises is amazing in this wowzer (new word!) of a poem.

Daniela Buccilli's avatar

Great poem. True.

Dick Westheimer's avatar

Every. Line. Whew, this is tough to read and damn near perfect.

Tod Cheney's avatar

a wake up call poem at 4 in the morning.