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Daniel Dissinger's avatar

Love these lines:

I am a stranger

learning to worship the strangers

around me

They really capture the verb-ness of poetry. Bringing it from poetry to poeming

Evelyn K. Brunswick's avatar

This is definitely proper poetry. Especially that final disguised rhyme. Short, sweet, lovely, sad, old, depth, yet skeletal - says more than what's on the page.

9.75/10 from me. Buy me a bag of lemon sherbets and you can have the extra 0.25

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