You are the beautiful half of a golden hurt
When he
Shuts a door—
Is not there—
Your arms are water.
Oh my! I'm just a puddle now.
Awwww, that was such a sweet poem, I was really hoping for a happy ending!!!! Great work anyway!
‘…free / With a ghastly freedom / …the beautiful half / Of a golden hurt.’ So perfect! Thank you Svetlana. 🙏💚
When he
Shuts a door—
Is not there—
Your arms are water.
Oh my! I'm just a puddle now.
Awwww, that was such a sweet poem, I was really hoping for a happy ending!!!! Great work anyway!
‘…free / With a ghastly freedom / …the beautiful half / Of a golden hurt.’ So perfect! Thank you Svetlana. 🙏💚