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Greg Fewer's avatar

Nicely written piece! Unusual subject matter, I would've thought, for 1961! I loved this line: "strange sedimentary stones, inscrutable cracks!". LOL

Rochelle Jewel Shapiro's avatar

I am giddy reading his wit. The Pope wears underwear I hope." It's direct and fresh (naughty too) and silly. Such an antidote to the boring "grad school-type poems" that are so popular these days.

Akhilesh Sarur's avatar

I didn't understand what the poem was about sorry 😔😅

Alexander Schmidt's avatar

It’s as if Wordsworth became a hippy and penned a poem in the likes of an off-handed Whitman.

Rochelle Jewel Shapiro's avatar

Loved your comment as much as I loved the poem.