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Michael Drummond's avatar

What a surprisingly good read. I really enjoyed this well.

Jane McBride's avatar

"The only way to truly know any story

is to take a minor character out for beers."

Great line!

safia Ijaz's avatar

“I love how this moves between humor and discomfort.

It questions belief, empathy, and certainty without preaching.

Sitting by that well of unfulfilled wishes felt painfully human.

BabeyWriter's avatar

I agree with you about the "without preaching" aspect, it feels more like casual profound conversation

Travis Lowe's avatar

I love every bit of this one

Brendon McLeod's avatar

very funny and insightful

Brendon McLeod's avatar

I love this poem. It's very well written. I've got a poem in a similar genre to this poem that I'm going to submit to you because of reading this poem.

Karan Kapoor's avatar

Please do :)