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Jean-Paul's avatar

FFS Bob, leave some for the rest of us!

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Comment on form: “like snow at your feet” —though this line could have felt like a run-of-the-mill simile, it does two things for me, cool me off and slow me down; but then, I guess, it does a third, because of those two specific functions: it’s as if, and to construct a simile of my own, I’m a boxer unexpectedly thrown into the corner for hydration and rest, then just as unexpectedly, pushed, like from a sling shot (a simile in a simile!) into the ring for round two, or for the last 3/4s of the poem… all the way till Sisyphus suddenly says, Try Again. KO!

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