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Face Melter's avatar

I love art about art. I also like the use of negative space as drama. Things unspoken are the drama and the romance. Reading it over and over and funding double meaning in the seemingly unimportant

Cate Frazier-Neely's avatar

This poem describes a long married or partnered life. I sort of needed this right now. Thanks for posting. subscribed.

T R Poulson's avatar

Oh wow! It really takes off with 'None of the lovers here look like us,' which turns us toward the speaker. Every line does so much work. Thanks so much for sharing :)

Caroline Bobby's avatar

oh my what a poem