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Alexander Schmidt's avatar

Anti-Whitman? pro-Whitman? Both?

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Bill Scott's avatar

Been reading more about Dhasal. And more of his poetry. Powerful and sordid. I like this guy. 🙄

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Bill Scott's avatar

Interesting poem. Certainly well-written. Personally, I like the last 21 lines the best, but some readers may think you have to do all the preceding lines in order to initiate the last 21. Which may be the author’s point.

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asleep's avatar

Hated this one. Tries to be all-uniting but why does everybody have a dick? Why does Man have a dick? Stop being edgy and see that women are real

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Cypherspace's avatar

I love this so much

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