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Alexander Schmidt's avatar

The energy in the leaps between sentences, and in the break of the lines: religious!

Vennie Kocsis's avatar

5/5!!!! 🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰

Gary Michael Dault's avatar

extraordinary stuff, dazzling with inmages each so fecund they spawn another hundfed poems.

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Gary Michael Dault's avatar

I wish I understood what you've written but I don't.

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Gary Michael Dault's avatar

I don't even understand THAT!

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Tara Mesalik MacMahon's avatar

I’m working on an erasure poem, has to do with “religion”( if one word was to describe). But I don’t believe I could possibly bring myself to erase one word of this gorgeous poem. I love Tomaz Salamun’s work. Thank you so much, Svetlana, for selecting this for today.